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Name: Alexei Malakhov

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Looks good! Please post in the Character tab.

Can you fix the paragraphs in the dialogue section and some of the typos a bit? We actually need a literal xenos-tech genius for the upcoming plot, so feel free to turn up the Good Will Hunting-in-grimdark-future-genius dial to eleven on this guy. Maybe he caught the eye of Ravenstein's agents when he got an Eldar/Ork/other xenos weapons system working in the heat of some battle or other?

Also- mention how long he's been working for Ravenstein. 30 might be a bit young for him.