[@Lo Pellegrino]

I read through your character sheet and I must say, I like Faruq a lot. And the fact you have him tied to another character from another RP must be fun for you. 

I like that Faruq is on the cusp of moving from naive, starry eyed young man to a seasoned warrior who has seen too much reality. He seems well rounded and not too abrasive, someone you could sit and have a beer with (or mead) and not worry about getting robbed or gutted at the end of the evening. That he realizes the stories of his father might have just been stories made up by his mother or at least heavily embellished to give Faruq a rolemodel rather than an empty hole where his father should have been.

His struggle with his war experiences and the indifference of powerful men is realistic and intriguing, he has not been totally lost apathy even if he's dipping into the moon sugar. That is something I'm looking forward to seeing, if he comes to terms with the fact he is using it as a crutch and tries to quit or if he continues down the path of self medication until it becomes a crippling addiction. 

I don't really have anything to offer, this is a well rounded character and understated but clearly defined.