[quote=@DarkwolfX37]
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Explain this em dash and what specifically I should do with it. 
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http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/em-dash.html

[quote=@DarkwolfX37]
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I don't know what "too purple" means. ;-;
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There's purple prose and there's beige prose. Purple prose is very wordy, while beige is the exact opposite.