[quote=@Mammalia]
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Look at the parentheses inside of the hider.
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("A move that, had it connected..." is still a fragment, and a glaring one. Reword it so that it gives off the same image (that is, that that move would have given you an advantage if you had succeeded), but using a normal sentence.)
Give me an example.