[quote=@DarkwolfX37]
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("A move that, had it connected..." is still a fragment, and a glaring one. Reword it so that it gives off the same image (that is, that that move would have given you an advantage if you had succeeded), but using a normal sentence.)
Give me an example.
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"If that move had connected, I might have gained the advantage, but as it were..." That variation can segway right into the next sentence.