And yeah, yo, I'm gonna repeat what I said: No one here has perfect posts, but its pretty obvious that our posts show obvious effort to minimize the grammatical goofs and spelling errors. This is a HIGH casual rp, yo. I was thinkin about making it advanced. You really couldn't argue and "win" because ultimately... we're the judges of what we deem acceptable in our rp or not. In essence, you're trying to say you can prove the judge wrong, when really, the judge decides what the standard is and what's right or wrong. Sure, we may expect more than most casual rp's, but hey, that's just how we roll. I already accepted you, and Zeph had valid points. Skai is willing to accept you, as well, but I respect that you chose not to argue about the whole grammar and spelling thing. I hope this doesn't mean you're going to IGNORE IT. Honestly, it isn't THAT much work, and a lot of your posts will be collabs. And in collabs (since we're all homies) you have more people there to fix your errors while you write (with your permission of course). So yeah, don't frown about it. Just do it, yo! --- Now onto things that are ACTUALLY debate worthy. Since I already accepted your character, I can't say much, but that I hope you'll be able to moderate your power. I only accepted your weapon because of the reason that you won't have any power. Why did I accept? Because usually, when I ask people "you think you'll be able to control your OP'ness?" they laugh it off like "of course, I'm no noob." So, I'm going to ASSUME you can keep her in control. This means no super-killing machine mode without permission and no super-discovery/invention mode without permission. Other than that, if you agree to what Skai said, then you're already in! WOO!