[quote=@LadyRunic] [u][b]This information is not known by any Fae save for Falk himself. It is a highly kept secret[/b][/u] Also to clear something up about the Wylde Hunt that I noticed. It's not Fall Fae, It can be but generally it is not. Falk? Perhaps you could? "The Wylde Hunt is a army, a nation. A sea of spirits and specters. Endless souls brought and bought by the years. I let no Fae within my realm go to waste." Yes, so the Wylde Hunt essentially is death. Death to those it hunts and is hunted by the Dead or the remains. A High Magick and something that costs Falk dearly though it is not really shown. Years are spent between Hunts gathering power and the dead for the next. The only one who knows the true nature are the most ancient of Fae, or the most learned as the Hunt in it's true form is something that is.... Well, taboo. [/quote] This is more or less the embodiment of popular legends regarding the Wild Hunt from Irish, Welsh and Scottish folklores. I appreciate the fact that the Wylde Hunt is supposed to be a huge mystery to every being in the fae kingdoms but even if this was kept hush hush by Falk and his minions anyone who'd ever visited the mortal world could glean all of this from human myths. Legends of the Wild Hunt might vary a bit but they are pretty consistent on most of the points up above. I don't really see why that would be such a big secret. Did you want an actual critique of how the OP is laid out and written or do you just want us to look over the information present and ask questions and suggest additions?