[quote=@DoubleFurCollar] [@Zelosse] My mistake. I posted my character directly in the Characters tab before getting your OK. Student CS: Name: Neil Arroyo Age: 17 Years Element: Earth/Metal (Mainly Metal) Appearance: [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/45/0e/02/450e02050c79031206257cbb698981ad.jpg[/img] Personality: Neil is a very friendly, and also very self-centered character. Not exactly self-centered, but he is very confident in his abilities, and is very front to make a point of it. He is a powerful metal elemental, but Neil has to make himself out to be the apex of his kind. He believes that his struggles of training himself and becoming so powerful entitles him to consider himself the best at what he does. History: Neil grew up in a very small town, far away from the academy. He discovered his ability to bend metal at a young age, and became very interested in it. He used to go off to the railyard, and move train tracks around, and such smaller things, until he became powerful enough to move entire trains. Not easily of course, as it is still a full train. Neil had both of his parents, and when he turned 15, he begged them to send him to the academy. They told him no, because it was to dangerous. They didn't want Neil to discover tapped abilities to become powerful. He started to save up his own money, and eventually left home. He took everything needed to get into the school. He took all the forms he got online, all his saved up money; and when he turned 17, ran away from home, in search of the Elemental Academy. He traveled afar, and eventually was able to get in. With fake signatures and a portion of his money stolen or gained illegally, Neil gained entry to the academy. Equipment: Neil often carries a cube of pure steel in his pocket. In a pinch, if there is no metal around, he can bend it into a useful shape or form. [/quote] Looks good to me. He isn't an elemental though he is an elementalist. Elemental refers to a creature, correct me if I'm wrong. I'm a little bothered by how he got into the academy though. I can't really understand to what he did to get into the school, it's a little unclear I think. Like if he would falsify the signatures of his parents his parents would eventually find out since they are already probably looking for him and stuff. Or did he like get a false passport from somewhere and use that to get into the school? My parents died sort of thing. Just giving ideas and trying to help nothing mean meant :) Furthermore it looks good to me [s]you can go ahead and post him in the cs[/s] >.> I dont understand how this happens so often with new people though XD Welcome to the group [img]https://31.media.tumblr.com/696cfe79ea149a0b2f4141018eb51378/tumblr_inline_n1581sXTRW1qzcxxq.jpg[/img]