I really enjoyed the post, and the amount of control over my characters was not too much for me. In the future, should there be more back and forth, we can work on one collaborative post or do shorter posts each as well. I have some things I have to do today, so I will get another post up this evening when I get home from my errands and such. I'm already liking how this story is developing, I am excited to see how we keep it up :)