[@Meiyuki]So far everything looks like it's coming together. Just a few items. 

The Sorcerer build isn't available until you hit "Up to Your Waist". You only have the minor talent option at "Feet in the Water". You'd have to hit up our lovely GM if you want to build a Sorcerer at this point. If not, you'll have to work up to it. I cannot make that call.

Your "Skill Points Spent" is 20. (My example sheet probably made that less than clear because it was a mid-campaign sheet. I've bumped it back down to what you'd see at the start. I apologize for any confusion I caused.)

I'd advise you to use the Spell Casting Template when you get there for sake of convenience since you don't already have it added on.