[@The Narrator]


You are going to have to explain how you power a single blade weapon. You are also going to have to write a lot more in the biography section. Whats his family, his past. Tell us about his upbringing in the upper echelon of the Turtle Clan. Expand on how he ended up taking up mechanics. 

Traits need to be worked. It should look something like this. And you have six of them to place.

*Craftmanship (Mechanical)