[@Weird Tales] your character is ridiculously powerful.
1. If you could fly it would be slow and awkward.
2. A wind construct would have very little strength and you could only summon one. 
3. Wind manipulation would be the ability to make a breeze.

If that's what you meant by your abilities section then maybe, but you also missed the history and personality sections. I'm not a GM but those were what I noticed. Mine was even a bit to overpowered for the start of this, so I worked with [@Scio] and now I think he's ok. I haven't posted the changes though, I was just going to wait for the main thread.