[quote=@Tip Tappers] Thanks for adding those bits, it looks great to me now. I like your spell choice too, and if you want you could even make her a little more experienced with alchemy. Syrup and Maple were most famous as potion makers, I'm sure at least some of that got passed down in the training. Backstory is straightforward and leaves room to go pretty much anywhere with the character. I give it a firm noice out of noice. [/quote] Ahah, thank you, thank you. I'll go ahead and give her some skill with that then. She's young though, so that's a major factor in limiting a lot of her skills. Couldn't make her a whole lot older, or she'd probably be a tad bit on the OP side even with just three rings, I think~ But of course, that's also what character development over the course of the RP is for. I do intend for her to get stronger~ ...and who knows, maybe she'll even dabble in some...less than reputable magics if she's ever given the opportunity and no one talks her out of it~