[@VitaVitaAR] So I finished the revised Seiichi, now Jian-Yu Sun. I'm prepared for grading. I was going to just edit in the last character post but I felt like this would be easier for you. [hider=Jian-Yu Sun, Miracle Exchange Student][u][b]Student[/b][/u]: [list][*][u][b]Name:[/b][/u] Sun Jian-Yu [*][u][b]Age:[/b][/u] 15 [*][u][b]Gender:[/b][/u] Male [*][u][b]Appearance:[/b][/u] [url=http://i.imgur.com/XPorNd1.jpg] Jian-Yu walks shoulder to shoulder among the average person. His stature is typical, at about 5’7” he’s neither imposing or noticeable. However, his rich green eyes deceive his timidity at times. His heritage… his blood defying his perceived nature.[/url] [*][u][b]Personality:[/b][/u] Firstly, one should know that Jian-Yu was an orphan. He fought for survival for several months before being found and placed into government care. This brought about a kind of feracity when it came time to be screened for adoption. When he was finally chosen, it was a surprise that a former general had taken interest. His feracity would prove to be a requirement for the man due to his intensive regimen. The regularly timid Jian-Yu was not berated outwardly though he could sense his father shied away from the condition. So in compensation, Jian-Yu would work hard during training and when enrolled into a Ritual Tech Academy was a furious competitor. That was until he nearly killed someone out of anger. That sorrowful moment sent Jian-Yu into a depression, suicide almost. After months of unsuccessfully attempting to coax his beloved son out of it, his father came to the end of his rope. The illustrious Academia he attended and his father made dealings to exchange him to a lesser school. Otsuki Academy was not the intended place but it would have to do. Now he, shamelessly wallows. An unrelenting gloom over his incident continuously prodding at his abilities. However, he has bouts of empathetic sensory. Whenever endangered or looked down upon, he rebels. Its as simple as that and it runs in his blood; a stream of diluted yet always present tendencies that leans towards a thuggish demeanor. [*][u][b]Skills:[/b][/u] Jian-Yu is the only protege of his adoptive father’s martial arts. Quite accomplished at it, his flexible kicks and open-palm strikes can deal heavy damage to anyone. This coupled with his masterful use of a staff can be compared to a beauteous, graceful dance. He is also disciplined and very physically well off. When it comes to literature he excels and while mathematically impaired, its due to a physical condition, perhaps phycological, that induces headaches when trying to work through an arguably complicated problem. [*][u][b]Equipment:[/b][/u] Divine Gear: [b]Innocent Ryui Bang.[/b] A mysterious memento and replica of the greatly admired Ryui Bang. Jian-Yu has had it ever since he could remember, wrapped and tied to a woven bracelet. He assumes it was left to him by unknown parents. [*][u][b]Abilities:[/b][/u] [url=http://i.imgur.com/MTZQ1je.jpg] Jian-Yu tends to take on a unnatural appearance when using Ryui Bang.[/url] Innocent Ryui Bang is a steel rod devoid of colour; a trio of golden bands, each embedded with light engines are wrapped around its form near the middle. A plethora of natural abilities are granted. A significant boost in physical strength. The ability to crush stone, dent steel, and move the length of five feet in a single second is all that Jian-Yu has been capable of jotting down without equipment. Along with these abilities comes Innocent Ryui Bang itself, which can shrink, grow, and expand. When not in use, Jian-Yu conceals it as small pendant dangling from his bracelet. [*][u][b]Brief Backstory:[/b][/u] Jian-Yu is the adopted son of a Chinese military general. Through an exchange program he was granted Japanese citizenship and transferred from his original Academia to Otsuki. He was raised by his father, who was an adept practitioner of several martial arts. The Sun man has passed down his artform to his son. It was Otsuki Academy’s drive that had them outsource for Jian-Yu. And Jian-Yu’s fear that drug him to the shamed Otsuki Academy.[/list] [/hider]