[quote=@carla6677] [@KahleenCuthald] how much do you expect us to write in post [/quote] I would like to get a good idea of what the character feels or thinks during the situation. If you can do that in two sentences and make us see what your character's thoughts or feelings are, that's fine. If you rather put it into 20 sentences, that's cool too. Try to find your own balance. Important is only that you try to use good enough grammar for people to understand it and use enough words and sentences to make other players see what your character is at currently. In conversations the writing is usually smaller and that's all fine. So I can live with a few. I can also live with a few more ;)