[@PKMNB0Y] I took your notes into consideration. Here is my final draft of my character. 


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Name: Calypso

Race: Nekomata

Race Abilities: Cat-scratch fever (20% chance of having your enemies hallucinate after scratching them), Poison Fang (15% chance of poisoning your enemies when biting them), Sleuth – when activated, you are nearly invisible. Works only in shadowy or dark areas, does not work against monsters with a good sense of smell. Making loud noises will cancel out this ability. Yowl – a high pitched cry that can cause confusion. Lasts for 5 to 10 seconds.  As this monster race grows it has the ability to change into a Bakeneko, or  “Changing Cat”, meaning it can take human form. Even in its strongest form, this monster is seriously weak, and must rely on it’s agility, quickness, and intelligence to keep itself alive. It has a strong aversion to light, and light attacks.

Gender:Female

Personality: Calypso was a serious, down to earth human that didn’t like to break rules. She was very studious and often judgemental, especially towards those that weren’t as serious as she was. Unfortunately, those traits seemed to have amplified after her reincarnation.

History (Pre-Mortem): Calypso was a  college honor student, and didn’t have much time for friends or games. She was dubbed “ice princess” by her classmates, and they often pretended to be cold when she walked by. Isolated, Calypso struggled with a sense of loneliness, and in a moment of weakness, attempted to pull the campus weirdo out of the way of a speeding truck. Not only was he not grateful, but  he stabbed her repeatedly for her trouble. As she lay bleeding to death on the concrete, she watched that weirdo racing down the road screaming “Truck-kun! Come back!”

Appearance :
[img]http://rs109.pbsrc.com/albums/n51/Kecherra/pretty.jpg~c200[/img]
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