[quote=@Rtron]
[@LokiLeo789]

It's been decided that you will not be starting out as a God, and you'll have to start from level 1.

As for your Domain and Portfolio, the Portfolio is too broad. You infringe upon many Domains, including Life, Order, Death, Nature, and Cosmic, without any apparent limitations. If you wish to continue with this portfolio, see Zephyriom and/or Vowzra for ideas on how to limit it.

As for your personality, it seems to be a bit of a mess of lots of different things not tied together very well. . If you could clean it up, or show more that some things are an act, that would be great. 
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Yep, I thought my Portfolio was a bit broad, I'll get on the personality, Thank you for looking over my CS.

[@Cyclone][@Kho] To me my X-men! (Looking fo a little help, advice, suggestions.)