[@fdeviant]: Alright, would it be alright to have your arrival happen around the last minute of Odette's portal's creation? This would allow a back and forth between a few players that happened before White Witch arrived and also past some needed time to make the scene more dramatic. It would also prevent them from arriving during a bunch of intense reactions and actions which might influence your PC's last post, drastically.

One way, and likely the best, would be to alter the ending. It might be better to have both of them watching for a moment, since Joseph did walk in and get his ass whooped, to determine who they need to help. With Melon's last post, it makes it pretty clear Rach is in danger without any questions being asked and allows for you to post again sooner.