[quote=@t2wave]
[@Burthstone] I am unsure how to critique others work when I do not find many flaws. 
[/quote]

[s]More ninjas...[/s]

I was actually going to link you to some of my writing so you could critique that.

But if you're uncomfortable and/or don't want to. That's fine. [sub]I'd just like to be told >.>[/sub]

[quote=@hatakekuro]
<Snipped quote by Burthstone>

What are you writing?
[/quote]

I write stuff all the time.

Well, not all the time.

But, right now, I'm quasi-working on something kind-of relating to this rp, but I have other writings [sub]That also happens to be on the internet.[/sub]