[quote=@Krot]
[@Chaotic Chao]

Once the demonstrations are over, are you gonna throw villains at us almost immediately? I don't want to tell you how to do your thing, but it would be much better if you allowed the characters some room to breathe instead of just dragging them from one set piece to another. That way, they can get to know each other better, form bonds so that when shit hits the fan, the stakes are higher.
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[quote=@Mr Allen J]
[@Krot] I agree, it's a bit early for villains. Do some build-up and foreshadowing.
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What they said.