[quote=@dragonmancer]
I'd like to make a dragon character who leads a pirate based faction
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Like a huge dragon in charge of pirates? Probably not. 

[quote=@AdobeFlash]
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Faction Name: Burned Earth

Alias: The Untouchables, Crazed Zealots.

Faction Type: Revolutionary group

Faction Specie(s): Human

Species Descriptions: N/A

Location: Series of abandoned buildings and warehouses; the faction is extremely small. Very few are allowed into it’s covert operations.

Faction Description: Led by a man disillusioned by current society, Burned Earth wishes for the utter destruction of society, so that nothing may be rebuilt. Currently working to dismantle the government via strategic attacks

Faction History: Burned Earth started with a message from God. A priest, lowly in the order he represented, was tired of the ideals the higher ups. He figured they had lost the way of the Church, and so left. He had lost his faith, the most important thing in his life. He was about to jump to his certain death, when lightning struck the wooden bridge, rickety in it’s nature, he had been standing on. It was ablaze, but the fires parted when the priest tried to walk. Suddenly filled with a purpose, he went on to create one of the most feared organizations in New Anathagos. 

Important Characters: Atlas, founder. 

Important Holdings/Territory/Possessions: A sector of the sewage system is currently being used as a base of operations

Relation to other Factions:Hostile
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The motivation of these folks seems a little thin atm. I'd want to see more interesting backstory behind one of the most feared anarchist/terrorist groups in the city besides 'disillusioned by current society'. The general concept is okay, and could even be tied into the main plot i have in mind, but this faction needs much more fleshing out. I know its a WIP, so I'll wait to see more, but that's my initial impression.