[quote=@Flagg] Like a huge dragon in charge of pirates? Probably not. The motivation of these folks seems a little thin atm. I'd want to see more interesting backstory behind one of the most feared anarchist/terrorist groups in the city besides 'disillusioned by current society'. The general concept is okay, and could even be tied into the main plot i have in mind, but this faction needs much more fleshing out. I know its a WIP, so I'll wait to see more, but that's my initial impression. [/quote] I'm in quite a bit of a rush. I'll polish it up when I get home, seeing as that I'm on my break and I'm on mobile. I'll make it more...menacing. Sorry about that, just wanted to reserve my spot