[@AdobeFlash]: I can help you with your HTML problems! All you have to do is pick a color, eg. green, and then substitute that into your HTML everywhere it says "color". Add a link to your character image in between the two [img] markings! Also, take out the asterisk before each "hr" to make a line! Like so:

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Add a picture of Adam right here!

[color=green][h3][b] Adam Dagon| 17 | Male[/b][/h3][/color]

[u][b][color=green]Appearance:[/color][/b][/u]

Adam stands at 6'1", with a slightly muscular build. He has messy blond hair, hazel eyes, and pale skin. Noticeable features include scar under right eye

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[u][b][color=green]Powers:[/color][/b][/u]

Adam has an ability that is quite useless in combat: He can speak to the dead. Being a Medium means Adam can see and converse with 'echoes' of people who have departed this world. Echoes act as copies of the deceased made up of energy.

[u][b][color=green]Weaknesses/Limitations:[/color][/b][/u] 

The dead scream. Adam cannot turn off his ability, and so sees echoes wherever he goes. And they see him. The dead scream about how they died, their hardships, their pain. It hurts Adam to constantly hear the moans of the departed, some of whom don't even know they're dead. 

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[u][b][color=green]Personality:[/color][/b][/u]

Adam is a spite filled human being, distrustful of everybody upon first meeting. Quick witted, he isn't against making a few mean jokes. Doesn't enjoy making friends, and just hates people in general. Likes dogs.

[u][b][color=green]Backstory:[/color][/b][/u]

Adam grew up in District 2, the area formerly known as Chicago. He lived in a small apartment with his sickly mother, who he cared for until her death in 2015. This devastated Adam, and might have been what broke him as a person. He moved in with his estranged father, who owned a bank. Life was dull, and Adam hated every second of it. When he tested positive for being a Mal, his father didn't bat an eye. His son was nothing more than a burden to him anyways

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[u][b][color=green]Talents/Skills:[/color][/b][/u] 

Can play guitar, and cooks a mean cake. Is good at cards

[u][b][color=green]Quirks/Habits/Other:[/color][/b][/u]

Loves gambling, and during gambling is the only time he really opens up

[u][b][color=green]TL/DR:[/color][/b][/u]  

Asshat, medium, good with cards
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WIP, I'm on mobile so it's sorta garbage. Tell me what you think
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For additional feedback, give me half an hour to take a shower, and then I'll send you a PM with more comments!! 

One thing that I can tell you right off the bat, however, is that it's a little short for an Advanced RP character sheet. Usually, we'd prefer a little more depth in the sheet. Why don't you check out my glorious friend Ogobrogo's CS in the character tab (it's the last one posted, so scroll down) for an example? I think that that might help a lot.

However, it's really very clear that you read through the lore, so thank you very much for that! I think that Adam has a lot of potential, so go ahead and edit it up a bit, and send it back to us!

[quote=@Mr Allen J]
shit

ya'll changed the sheet format, and now I have to convert
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Sorry, Allen!!! But this new version does look nicer now, huh? Ogo made it, and it's so pretty~~~ <3