Query: How exactly does her shadowsuit reduce her visibility? (I am of course presuming that it is her visibility to her enemies, not her own ability to see.)
Query: Does her other suit inform her of ALL movement nearby, or just the movement of enemies? And if the latter, how the heck does it do that?
Observation: Technically, most weapons in the SW galaxy are plasma weapons, you don't need to specify that for your DL-18.
Advisement: Star Wars ships that are not X-wings are rather easy to find, you just have to look. At all. Example: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Starships_by_affiliation
Observation: Those skills and flaws don't look very balanced to each other at all. Kinda like they don't even try to be. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, that depends on Heat, just an observation.