[@vosenedich] You may want to speak to the science personnel, I can't see Locke picking up a robot and deciding to keep it. If you can find someone, other than a couple of typos it looks good.

If you do want the robot to be Lockes, have someone 'gift' it to him for the journey on the Ark.

[@OrangeInk] A fellow studier of Psychology or personal hobby? :P