[@CrystalApple] What does [b]Magician's Confusion[/b] actually do? For now, I'm treating Shadow and Unholy Magic as separate entities, so choose one. In the event that I'll make them interchangeable, I'll make sure to tell you. :) [@Bishop] Maybe you could expand that [b]History[/b] just a bit? Also, I'll allow [b]Melancholy[/b], but you have to ask permission every time you want to use it and on what information. Otherwise, it would be unfair. [@Duthguy] I'd suggest you change [b]Pickpocket[/b] to something else like [b]Thievery[/b] or [b]Sleight of Hand[/b]. [@Royzooka]If you want her to be bulkier, you have to replace one of your talents with [b]Muscle Tone[/b]. And the bit about the cracked skull kind of confuses me. Care to explain? Anyway, you can only have 2 talents so pick from [b]Muscle Tone[/b], [b]Natural Fighter[/b], and [b]High Alcohol Tolerance[/b].