[quote=@The Nexerus]
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A couple spelling and grammar mistakes scattered about that are a little distracting. There's also a few contentions between the lore you have written for your house and your nation and the lore we've written in the group pad. Can't really spite you for that, though, since you can't see the pad.
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Just read the whole thing out loud to the missus, which helped me spot the errors I think you noticed. She of course called me a giant nerd so your notes are much appreciated. 

And you're right about that pad! I'll correct the lore when I get access to it.