[@GingerBoi123]
Alright, everything's looking fine here to me. Loving the music based theme. 

[@Aquaknight]
Yep, everything's looking good here as well, loving the backstory. 

[@Nevix]
All clear over here too, loving the weapon.

[@GLITCHOBLIVION]
I'd reccommend what Fox said if you can't copy paste the info into the reply box on the forum. Also just to mention, if you are going to play a 15 year old, you're going to have to explain what's special about her case enough that she'd be taken. Lustre Academy is somewhat desperate but an explanation is still required. 

[@RomanAria]
Decent so far, but again, if you're going to make them 15 then you need to add that into their bio.