[@boomlover] can you tweak it a lil' as I don't want the escorts blown up quite yet. Also bear in mind that at the time the ship appears we've already been in flight for a couple of minutes. If you're struggling with the post and finding words, snip it for now and take it to the Google Doc and I can either help or you can spend a little more time looking at it. No need to rush it if you aren't happy with it.