[quote=Touhoure] So before I forget I am going to post a large thing on this-and-that answering all your questions and concerns and what's going on. I was originally going to do this after I finished my profiles since that would be a decent outline to work on, but considering that I may procrastinate even more, I thought, "Hey, I might as well just do it right now." I'll also throw in a disclaimer -- I'm either kind and lenient or straightforward and to my word. I'm sorry if any of this comes off as mean -- I share no intention of doing so! However, I must not let this version of the role-play become unbalanced and chaotic as the original. On top of that, I like to consider my co-GM's words, so moving on...✥ : It's okay, it's okay -- I personally don't find longer biographies necessary, but if it helps keep consistency, then throw in whatever you may. Now, you did put yourself in a tricky position because you did want to be part of the Kingdom of Michael as a 23 year old princess. Even if she didn't want to take the throne, she would naturally be bumped up, unless if she ran away... but her chance of return? Well, if she returned, she may not be very welcomed, or at least not warmly. You are put in a difficult spot too because if your character was younger than the twins, this wouldn't be much of an error. I can try to see if Wisp wants to bump our character ages up, but I don't want the whole "depending-on-another" going down. Yet, at the same time, you kind of do depend on the twins because they are the siblings to your character technically (unless you toss up something like she was adopted by the king and queen). I'm sure to revise my profile and edit the mention of the elder sister when we figure out how Kyalia will fit. We can try to make her a temporary queen, and perhaps by her word she stepped down? I'm not too sure if that is possible, but another thing I would personally consider is how often she did these violent acts. I feel like enough acts would make her unsupported by the people or perhaps null her from being heir by her parents. Sure, I mean, there was that , but think about it being like... multiple times -- and how much trust there is between those lines! You can also lower her age to make her younger than 19 to keep her from ever being considered queen in the first place. And then there's the minor detail of the surname being Zaphiris, thus she'll be Kyalia Zaphiris since she's part of the royal family that is currently ruling Michael.✥ [/quote] She only did it once...but she never talked to anybody...they can't trust a queen they've barely met. Further, she refused to marry and refused to have an heir...I would prefer not to reduce her age to 19 just because of how I create my characters and how their personalities usually play out, with the air of someone in their early to mid twenties compared to someone in their teens. Maybe I could have made it that she ran away and came back recently, after the war had started...they would have already been coronated so they wouldn't be uncoronated would they? Or maybe she's the bastard daughter of the King but he recognized her as his child so therefore she would technically be a Princess but not eligible for the throne...if either one of those sound good I will edit....and I will add her surname...I am so horribly ADD about editing things...I mean to change two things and I forget the easiest one haha.