[quote=@Parfex] [@Din] What I really want to see is your skeleton for how this is going to play out. We are kinda 1x1 RPing Nyt's storyline and not so much Adrian's. Vega just needs to interact and fight to grow his powers so he can generate a portal for you. So basically, you are calling the shots. But reading your chapter skeleton, we are around chapter 2 or 3? ...so next would be to find her dog or maybe interact with Din? - If this were a marvel movie, I think there would either be a battle or a mission assignment or the scene would switch to what the main villain is up to. What are you feeling? [/quote] Ah, the chapter outline was mostly meant for Din. She left Nyt alone after they met and didn't come back until years later to retrieve her. It was suppose to be at age 16, I believe or around there. How about a mission to gather something in space? :D