[quote=@POOHEAD189]
Well that took awhile. Hope the post is alright^^. Had to correct a grammar error or two after I posted :arghfist
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Solid post. Just two things you should watch out for; the name is spelled Ashav, and start a new paragraph each time someone different talks.

[quote=@Mortarion]
Took me far logner than it should but my psot is done. I do hope it's ok that Tsleeixth overheard ROze and approached her to voice his opinion, if not I can edit it out. 
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You're good, sir. Carry on.