[center][b]And the time for reviews have come![/b][/center] [@my Lalia] Hey Lalia, haven't seen you around in awhile! Overall I like the concept of Taza, interesting to have somebody who still has some amount of faith in the gods that had abandoned them to there wretched fate. My only complaint really is if maybe you could flesh out her background just a little bit more. As it sort of leaves some holes mostly the gaps between the time she was 15 and the present. You know in that time important things like the Gods War happened and how such events may have effected her. But beside that everything else is looking pretty good! [@Athinar] A gruff north man, a man after my own heart. My concern is the same as Lalia's really, while the background does give a general idea of his history, it once again is a little more sparse than I would prefer. Give it a little more detail and a little more meat to it and everyone else looks good! [@vietmyke] Yeah, I'd probably recommend changing the last name. Wyld is a word that is going to be thrown around a lot if you haven't guessed already. Well she certainly came out differently than the first idea you pitched to me but I kind of like this one more to tell you the truth! I wonder if all her fancy martial training will be any good when push comes to shove. She's quite the jack of all trades But I trust you enough to know you won't forget the master of none part and make her into a walking war god. Anyway accepted! [@TheWizardLizard] Ah the good knight come to save us all. Hmm the background is once again a little sparse but it does at least provided a nice little path work to follow how he got from point A to Point B. I wonder how the cliched Knight of Virtue is going to deal in a world that spits on those ideals wherever it sees fit. Anyway I see no major problems really so Accepted as well! [@Godric] Ahh a merchant of all things most interesting indeed! Anyway much of the same deal as the [@TheWizardLizard] background is sparse but serviceable and tells how he got to know effectively enough, and everything else looks good, he sounds like a right bastard which means I will probably love him. Accepted