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Name: Sasha O'Neill
Image: half long brown hair, with striking green eye's

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Age: 20
Species: human
Goals: To interview an elder vampire, and become a wold famous reporter. She wants to know more about vampires, and help anit-vampire humans understand that not all vampires are so dangerous. A very naive thought indeed.
Faction: pro-vampire
Backstory: Grown up in a peacefull human village near the Rocky mountains, Sasha had never seen a vampire in her entire life. She only heard some stories from her mentor who went to the big city's from time to time. Her mentor was what you could call,... well a vampire hunter. Killing them if they had hurt or killed a human. Bit of and outlaw as he was, he had many run ins with SOLDIER for they were not enterily happy about his activeties. He learned Sasha how to kill a vampire if she was ever in danger, something she luckely never had to use.
After working at the Daily Express, a lokal news paper. She decided it was high time to make her way towards the big city to fulfill her life long dream. 

Powers/Skills: the pen is mightier than the sword, she has a silver tounge that knows how to sweettalk anyone. She knows when to keep silent and use her writing instead. Through her years at the Daily express and she has gotten many connections within the writers world, and knows who to call for what information. She is also a great tracker and knows how to survive in the wild to some extend, for she grew up surrounded by mountains and nature.
Equipment: pen, paper, a old shoulderbag containing ink, old maps and some devices that hold the known history of both vampires and humans. 
Weapons:a small silver dagger, handgun.  
Themesong:
[url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d7BrZf2ZVwI[/url]
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Interesting a civilian. I would possibly increase her age a bit. 20 is an rather young age for someone to be a world famous reporter. I mean I'd say maybe you could get that status in your mid to later twenties if you're lucky, more probably in your thirties (forties would probably do it but you'd lose your young girl charm normally). So I'd say push the age up a tad, unless you have some reasonable excuse as to why her "years" at a local newspaper connected her to a world-wide-web of writer. But I suppose the kids in Japan are trained to be super children, given the number of times Kids saved the world with beyblade, pokemon, yugioh, digimon, etc, etc, etc. No wonder why getting into a university is hard when you've all saved the world by age 16 four to eight times. All joking aside, just please watch your word usage, I think there's an odd typo in there I noticed but other than the age factor I think she's fine.

I normally am more of a stickler for the details but there's not much to be fussy about.