[quote=@Chaotic Chao]
Didn't know where to post this, its a little embarrassing. I want to become a better roleplayer. But can't seem to improve.

If anyone has tips, way to improve, or able to Tudor me, please tell me.
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Write posts that are of a slightly longer length so you experiment with grammar and descriptions, use a thesaurus for words you feel need to be adjusted (eg: said can be swapped with expressed, shouted, groaned, etc), spend time describing details (eg: what colour was the teacup, was it hot, what smell did the tea give off, is it alone or with food) and read.

Reading doesn't have to be a novel either. Watching a movie in sub titles can help too as it will give you an idea on the way people speak and how to write with different mannerisms.