[quote=@The Grey Dust]
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Interesting a civilian. I would possibly increase her age a bit. 20 is an rather young age for someone to be a world famous reporter. I mean I'd say maybe you could get that status in your mid to later twenties if you're lucky, more probably in your thirties (forties would probably do it but you'd lose your young girl charm normally). So I'd say push the age up a tad, unless you have some reasonable excuse as to why her "years" at a local newspaper connected her to a world-wide-web of writer. But I suppose the kids in Japan are trained to be super children, given the number of times Kids saved the world with beyblade, pokemon, yugioh, digimon, etc, etc, etc. No wonder why getting into a university is hard when you've all saved the world by age 16 four to eight times. All joking aside, just please watch your word usage, I think there's an odd typo in there I noticed but other than the age factor I think she's fine.

I normally am more of a stickler for the details but there's not much to be fussy about.


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I think you got me wrong here, she WANTS to become a world famous reporter, she is far from becoming one. And in my experiance, 5 years is more than enough to get many connections( I did the same with my job and such)

And it is very possible that I have a weird typo to my writing, english is not my native language. If there are words I misspelled or something like that PM me so I can improve. ( right now I use google translate for the words I don't know)