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[@Jedly]

Aw man, mine is so rough and limited to the words I know so far, I need to learn so many new words to describe my surroundings and such
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Mine is too direct, and I have trouble with how to approach dialogue, so I just mimic other peoples' formats.

[@Jedly] is a good reminder that I need to start reading as much as I did as a kid. That'd be a hell of a benefit to my writing.