[@The Grey Dust] Looks good, [@Sigil] will need to look over it as well as the Co-Gm. Have 2 little things on my part. One is you have listed a knife that can be used as an improvised weapon but nothing listed out in your skills for weapons period. Are you wanting to add in a basic knife skill? Or keep him fully a glass cannon type? Two, is the bag of holding - That is a no-no. (Have already turned down several Cs sheets with Bags of Holding on them. BoH is not considered a low level item.)