[quote=@DarkwolfX37]
https://www.quotev.com/story/7829042/A-Certain-Espers-Fate-Yandere-Accelerator-x-Esper-Reader/2

This writing style is bothering me but I can't tell why. Is it over-reaching? Is it just trying too hard? I can't tell. 
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Ew, gross. Without even thinking about what you wrote, my first impression was "They're trying too hard." It's obvious they lack a strong grasp on the intricacies of higher English.