[@BeautifulSnow] Okay, sorry it has taken so long - Here we go - 

Kellie - 
Under Location - It needs to be city at time of break out, not the exact location. 
Appearance - You have her listed at 5'2" and 165 pounds but a build of normal. At that height and weight she would be obese. I am 5'5" - at 165lbs my body type is overweight (And that with a lot of muscle mass) - You would need to either raise her height by a new inches, lower her weight by 20-30 lbs, or change the body build to Overwieght/obese. - granted at this far into the "End Times" to keep weight on is difficult. More likely with the face claim and such she would be a thinner build and weigh closer to 115-110lbs (Which is actually in the more normal range for a height of 5'2")
Gun and Bullets - need a little more specifics on this - at least broken down to hand gun or shotgun
Gun under skills - Have to pick a type of gun since using different guns requires different skills - again broken down to hang gun, shot gun, riffle, ect. 
Post Outbreak Skills - You may want to add in scavenging or something because right now she doesn't have anything that she could have used to keep her and her daughter alive to find food and such. (Check the other CS sheets for ideas)

Anastasia - 
Location - like with mother, town needs to be listed instead of home
Sexuality - even though it probably won't come into play it needs to be listed - This is the sexuality at time of birth that is predetermined through DNA (this is what I go off of for this so people can't just suddenly go hey, I was hetero my whole life but I like this persons character so I am switching to gay. Yeah, nope. So assign her a sexuality to begin with)
Fears - Walkers cannot be a listing for Fears since everyone has that. Need a different one.
Coding - There is a color coding issue half way down the CS, and at the end. 
Song - This is a theme song to get a mood for the character - has to be there. 
Why - Still has to be filled in

Think that covers it.