[@Zelosse]: Okay, um... I'm sorry to say I don't feel your character is in an acceptable state at the moment.

The big issues are in his conduct. The dissection of his enemies is not something that the Iron Rose Knights would condone or allow, as while they certainly kill their enemies unnecessary cruelty runs quite counter to their founding on the kindness of Mayon.

Another matter is the mercy killing of a superior officer. As described, I... don't think he'd get a promotion for it and it'd probably be seen as treason, unless the foe was someone who wouldn't have just captured him or the poison actually would have killed him. ^^;

I think "poisoning mad doctor" might not be the best way to take things for this. ^^;

[@ghastlyInc]: I really wish you would have talked to me more before writing this up, so we could have caught these problems a bit quicker. : (

For one, there hasn't been decades of peace, it's only been a couple years since the last Captain of the Iron Rose Knights died in the act of taking down Phoran Cal's rebellion. It's relatively peaceful, yes, but it's relative peace for a country that's been frequently at war for decades.

I also wish you'd have contacted me one more time about the demon arm, as I actually have some more ideas on demons and stuff. As it stands I at least would really like if you renamed his abilities(since I'd prefer if people avoided borrowing names directly from real world mythology) and discussed with me a bit more about how the arm works.