[@Buddha]I think I fixed what you wanted me to. I also added the affiliation section, and elaborated on the Smoke Release: Deadly Pellet Incursion technique. I forgot to mention the technique's offensive capabilities (because I forget that not all of you are figments of my imagination). 

I'd appreciate it if you gave it another read.

Also, as for earlier, I was not trying to be a sarcastic twatnipple. I really enjoyed reading your reactions towards different aspects of the CS.