[@Buddha]
Well that was the most fun I've had reading something in a while. So thanks for that. :lol

Anyway to answer some miscellaneous questions for you while I have a free moment.
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"Nana korobi ya oki" Is an old japanses proverb literally meaning "Fall seven times and stand up eight". You know because we've already establish that angsty tenacious rebels gotta rebel and angst. But mostly angst. 

Takahasi Clan, there a mixture of both shinobis and regular people because you know I figure that not all Ninja Clans are made of entirely badass ninja. You gotta have a few duds in the bunch right? So the duds deal with the business stuff as well as those ninja too old to go all ninjaing.

How did they get their metric fuck ton of money? The easiest analogy I can compare them to is something like the House of Medici. Started out with just some dude loaning out money to other dudes, fast forward several decades and eventually you end up with a family that has a lot of money (god bless interest) and basically controls all of Renaissance Europe for shiggles. They of course are not on that scale but you know money opens doors. Or yes, you can also call them the Jews of Naruto because that works as well.  

Kaze no Yaiba: Yeah I figured as much, I was like how they portray this is pretty OP but giant wind swords are awesome so I'm going to swing for it. :lol But yeah, I'll keep it toned down and make a note that unlike in the anime you can actually see the thing clearly and dodge it for that manner.

Takahashi: Katameru, yeah that's fine, she really couldn't do it to an enemy if she wanted too any because she has to maintain contact and perform the jutsu which, I imagine a foe really would pull away before she could do that. The other option of course is to make it work on living things but I thought that may be a little too overpowered because than you have people going all Superman for twenty seconds with the ability to punch a hole through a tank let alone a human. 

And yeah the Kunai would get heavier and the range is probably going to drop like a lot. The difference from throwing a pebble to like throwing a forty pound weight, but in those cases she would probably be using the super dense knife to like pierce through bone or something a little more up close and personal you know.
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But yeah thanks for the critiques! I'm currently finishing up something for a meeting I have tomorrow but once I'm done with that, I'll make some edits in the CS proper to make those things in the Jutsu section and the other places more clear.