Review is in [color=39b54a]Green[/color].

[color=39b54a]Oooh yea

this is going to be great cs

woooooowwwwww

im going to review it[/color]

[quote=@Renny]
Finally got him done. Go ahead and massacre him. [color=39b54a]i will ty[/color]

Fuck you, [@Buddha]! But yes, yes I was. And as you can see, I present [color=39b54a]gay[/color]ness to you. [color=39b54a]fix'd[/color]

[hider=Maema Nisshoku][center][color=orange][h1]Maema Nisshoku[/h1]
[sub]“[i][color=39b54a]nah there's only place for one snark edgelord here fgt[/color][/i]”[/sub][/color][/center]
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[color=39b54a]this is not how u play the piano wow[/color]
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[center][color=orange][h2][i]Personnel Files[/i][/h2]
[sub]Accessible by personnel with a C3 security clearance or upwards.[/sub][/color][/center]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Name[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Maema Nisshoku [color=39b54a]the name just rolls off the tongue, ill call him mama[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Aliases[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i] Swordless one, Dragon child, O'lat (plague) [color=39b54a]only thing in common they have is their edge level[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Age[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]17[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Rank[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Chūnin[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Affiliation[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Hamajo Confederation [color=39b54a]good boy[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Sex[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Male[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Birthplace[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Kumo-province, Kumogakure [color=39b54a]not black denied[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Bloodline[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Nisshoku[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Sexuality[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Heterosexual, his current [url=http://i.imgur.com/qDVYCks.jpg]girlfriend[/url] is unhappy with his choices to align with Hamajo Confederation [color=39b54a]how much does she charge him an hour[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]

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[center][color=orange][h2][i]Appearance Descriptions[/i][/h2]
[sub]As compiled on basis of the 11th corps intelligence gathering, including pictures[/sub][/color][/center]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Appearance[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i] Seventeen years have come and gone. Genetics, time, and training has honed him into a handsome looking male [color=39b54a]id lenny face but fk it[/color]. Even among the [color=39b54a]cotton[/color]lands of Kumo-province he’s being hailed and admired for his stature and build [color=39b54a]he's not black no way will he be complimented for his build over there[/color]. In comparison to others of his kind, Maema  dons his clothing in hopes of being prepared for combat at any time. He’s accustomed to wearing tshirts of varying colors underneath different types of outerwear (usually some form of gakuren). Darker hued trousers fall over his legs, while a deep blue sash ties around his waist. Unnaturally black haidate pieces--lined with gold--protects his thighs. Off-duty he’s more or less the same. He doesn’t feel the need to be fashionable so he can come off as rugged and simple. Either way he’s always wearing the same ankle-high, heavy-duty sandals. A optimal mixture between combat boots and ninjawear. A cherished item flows under both his sash and haidate, a mantle of sorts colored crimson with gold fringes lining its edges.

While others were plowing in the fields of their farms Maema was being tortured by his father’s training methods [color=39b54a]he cant gather cotton like his brethren huh i see[/color]. His face is in conflict with the roughcast of his body. Where lean, hard muscle are pressed tight between necessary fat and skin on his body; his face is kinda of long and elegant. The only fierce part to his face is the sharpness of his golden eyes, hidden behind his dull expression.

Aforementioned his body is near-perfection [color=39b54a]pls[/color]. It's been honed for mobility and strength, to soak up  and adapt to predictable disturbances on the battlefield. His sleek body looks unimpressive in clothing, however, beneath said clothes the muscles behind the skin are visible. Four highly developed abs fall into a flat stomach as if the rest were abandoned. The lower half of his legs are thin in appearance, making the top half seem bulky in comparison. All in all, Maema could be seen as the typical ninja but atypical man. [color=39b54a]so an average shonen character[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Height[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]5’9”/ 1.75m[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Weight[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]153lbs/69kg[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Build[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Maema is made up of lean muscle, his physique shows this rather well. His mass is dominant in his torso and arms, giving them a solid, [i]cut[/i] look. When compared to his arms, though covered with cloths and the sorts, his legs can seem kinda meek [color=39b54a]he skips leg day, i can smell the douchebaggery already[/color]. He has a feral form to his gait, some call it wolven. Others call it innate confidence.[/i][/indent][/indent]

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[center][color=orange][h2][i]Psych. reports[/i][/h2]
[sub]Medical secrecy applies.[/sub][/color][/center]
[center][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Fearless[/i][/b] ❖ [b] [i]Impulsive[/i][/b] ❖ [b] [i]Apathetic[/i][/b] ❖ [b] [i]Hopeful[/i][/b] ❖[/color][/center]

[color=39b54a]apathetic but hopeful, these two seem funny together for some reason[/color]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Personality[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Maema was taught at an early age that being a genius meant nothing in the face of three entities. Those three things were experience, numbers, and the unknown [color=39b54a]p sure a genius would handle these three factors better than any cunt trying to be smart about it[/color]. He learned the value of being fearless days after finding his mother’s head on the porch [color=39b54a]ooohhh la la[/color]. To step to the challenge without second-guessing yourself or those around you inspired a kind of fear and admiration. That lesson didn’t take long to become concrete. The next one did. It was a lesson of analytical schooling, one that guided him well in deciding if he should approach a situation with reckless abandon or patience. He can go either way when lives aren’t on the line. When they are a preternatural impulsiveness springs to life. 

Maema wants to be a saviour [color=39b54a]mama jesus[/color]; he’s seen the ruthless of the Hamajo Confederation, and has vowed to never just sit by again. This, unfortunately isn’t coupled with some disregard for his own life. Not in the slightest. He has taught himself to be apathetic to others [color=39b54a]so hopeful holy shit[/color], to toss aside a hopeless situation [color=39b54a]p hopeful there too[/color]. That’s not something he’s proud of but his father was always a very grave man. 

Outside of the norm, outside of bloodshed and war; one might catch him smiling. Maybe even laughing but it's rare [color=39b54a]and here comes the barbecue sasuke[/color]. His life has been undoubtedly hard. Growing up in Kumo-province taught a valuable lesson: not everyone is looked after by the Confederation [color=39b54a]damn rite u parasite[/color]. Because of this Maema could be consider a cynical youth [color=39b54a]he's enjoying the sauce yes[/color]. He looks at every situation with caution and finds most people, specifically those full of cheer, extremely annoying [color=39b54a]is what happens when you have too much of the sauce[/color]. Despite being indifferent to most people, Maema has a hard time seeing others suffer. His father calls it “White Knight Syndrome” [color=39b54a]if you could stop doing that with girls online dat be gr8[/color] and says it has no place in the world of ninjas. Maema calls it saving himself. 

He sees it that way sometimes.

When he was child he didn’t get along with others [color=39b54a]this is a recurring trope i've noticed, did his girlfriend see the light in him no one understood????[/color]. In fact he hated them for rejecting him when he actually tried to be friends with them. Maema learns his social lessons quickly. He engraves them harshly into himself and makes sure not to make the same mistakes as before. If nothing else can be said about him, it's that he can hold horrifically long grudges. [color=39b54a]salty mf[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]History[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i][b]Birthright[/b]
The story goes that a wandering samurai found his true love in the middle of blood and tears. Supposedly he was renowned throughout the countries as the “The [color=39b54a]metrosexual[/color] Dragon” a warrior whose blade struck true more times than not. A sellsword whose assistance and friends gave victory to those who hired him. His name was Yasu Nisshoku and he fell in love with a traveling philanthropist. She was not perfect [color=39b54a]6/10?[/color] but she inspired him to do things for the greater good. When Haruhi [color=39b54a]since when did the god of the universe live in kumo wtf[/color] retired to Kumogakure, Yasu was behind her, hoping to settle down and build a family. 

Years afterwards they gave birth to a boy. They named him  Maema in concert with the loose-theme of their own names. They took on Yasu’s family name: Nisshoku and almost instantly he was given the moniker “Dragon child” by Yasu friends and “Goddess’ son” by Haruhi’s friends and family. [color=39b54a]beats the wolf children, naming them after the weather of that specific day 'ohey today there's heavy drought, let's call our kid ... HEATWAVE FUK YA'[/color]

The boy’s youth was interrupted by the Hamajo Confederate taking over Kumogakure. The province changed for the worst afterwards. It became flooded with poverty and eventually, through some unknown process became a farming province. It was an ugly adjustment but Yasu and Haruhi did so without open complaints. For a time. [color=39b54a]the confederates are reclaiming their cotton son[/color]

[b]Decision[/b]
While Maema was working the fields, training, and attending school; his mother was busy stirring up trouble. She didn’t agree with the Hamajo Confederation. She fought against it with political movements; playing on the different causes to start a small alliance behind her humanitarian rallying points [color=39b54a]fucking hippies[/color]. Yasu watched this behind the scenes, warning her to be careful. She thought she had been. She was secretive about her growing rebellion but that would prove useless against the Confederation’s resources. The last Maema would see of his mother was her body’s gruesome decapitation, her head tilted on their home’s porch. [color=39b54a]at least the confed have style, fukin hippies uggghhhhh[/color]

It was covered-up to be some Hamajo radical but Yasu had his own suspicions [color=39b54a]listen to Kyuubi news ull be fine( get it cuz FOX NEWS HAHAHAHAHAHHAA)[/color]. He tempered his rage into productive action. When his comrades came back with information that suggested a Hamajo higher-up had quelled the Kumo-province uprising, it was then that Yasu thought to act. That was quickly snuffed out once he learned the merciless truth. That numerous, inconspicuous deaths that occurred only months after Haruhi’s own. It worsened when he lost all contact with a number of his friends.  [color=39b54a]pinochet taught us well[/color]

Afterwards Yasu was struck with depression. [color=39b54a]baaawwww[/color]

He redouble Maema’s training. From physical conditioning to an understanding of topography. There was a range of other studies that he was required to soak up but none of them were quite as effective as sparring and mental games. Years traversed faster than he thought and before long, Maema was a Chunin in the Hamajo Confederation. [color=39b54a]<3 no gf seeing him as a tortured soul tho k fien u win[/color]

[/i][/indent][/indent]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Familial ties[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]Maema’s relationship with his father is strained. He greatly admires the man his father use to be. The fun-loving, dramatic man that was a reluctant-hero. Nowadays the two of them greet each other in alien apathetic forms. As if too much emotion could cause a catastrophe. Sometimes he resents his father for giving in to the pain. 

Yasu Nisshoku | Father | 34, Kumo-province, Yasu is a farmer who passes the time by wallowing in his own misery. Occasionally you can catch him practicing his unique, saw-sword swordsmanship outside of his home. [/i] [color=39b54a]young as fuck holy shit, fukin teen parents[/color][/indent][/indent]

[color=39b54a]no gf still, i was right to assume she's a hoe. gibe price plz my lesbian char is interested[/color]
[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Dreams, short term goals, and fears.[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i]His childhood ended the day he stumbled upon his mother’s decapitated head. Since then he’s had no dreams, only goals. He wants to hurt the Hamajo Confederation and wouldn’t mind returning his father’s smile in the process. He fears what the world may look like if the Hamajo Confederation went unchecked. [color=39b54a]so he's hamajo but he's not. time to bring something to fear then[/color][/i][/indent][/indent]

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[center][color=orange][h2][i]Combat reports[/i][/h2]
[sub]Gathered based on exercises, training routines, and combat experience reports[/sub][/color][/center]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Combat style[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][i][b]Maema attacks with unrelenting, self-perilously, and overkilling force. [color=39b54a]tryhard[/color] He utilizes his kekkei-tota in conjunction with his taijutsu, bojutsu, and limited ninjutsu to decimate all. When he can’t find those kinks he doggedly attacks until he’s weighed the opposition down to near nothing. Oddly enough, he’s prone to being caught in genjutsus [color=39b54a]hehehehhehehehehehehehhehe[/color] and lacks the knowledge to counteract sealing jutsus as well. He’s also known to be a tad overconfident. [color=39b54a]he seems gud, tho why is he overconfident if you make it clear like 4 times that he learns from his bs. p sure after seeing all this shit from hamajo he'd tone down the confidence, especially if he calls other more cheery/confident ppl annoying[/color] [/b][/i][/indent][/indent]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [b] [i]Kekkei Genkai[/i][/b]--[/color]
[indent][color=orange][i][b]❖ Name[/b][/i][/color]
[indent] Suiginton (Mercury Release)  [/indent]
[color=orange][i][b]❖ Description[/b][/i][/color]
[indent] Suiginton (Mercury Release) is more or less exactly what it sounds like. The control, creation, and manipulation of the silvery-white substance. The liquid metal is poisonous, causing severe damage to the senses, muscles, and nerves. Mostly producing tremors, physical weakness, and a cruel disorientation in most beings. Suiginton is a Kekkei Tota that combines Earth, Water, and Lightning chakra natures.[/indent] [color=39b54a]yeah you better go into detail on that later[/color]
[color=orange][i][b]❖ Strengths[/b][/i][/color]
[indent] Mercury is malleable. It strengths come from its flexibility and the poisonous effect it can have in combat. Its also conductive of electricity and rather useful in a pinch. Small applications can be made to counteract potentially difficult situations. For example making a key for a door, flight, or discreetly taking out masses. Handling it most of his life has given him a high resistance to the poisoning. [color=39b54a]still needs details on poisoning[/color] [/indent]
[color=orange][i][b]❖ Weaknesses[/b][/i][/color]
[indent]Mercury is weak to both heat and cold. It turns brittle when met with tundric temperatures  and melts when it comes into contact with sweltering heat. Suiginton is dangerous. The key to this is actually afflicting Maema with the cold or heat. This works better with cold than it does heat. If his temperature drops, his mercury is brittle and useless. If hot, the mercury comes out incapable of forming solid incarnations. [color=39b54a]k[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [i][b]Ninja techniques[/b][/i][/color][/indent]



[indent][color=orange]❖ [i][b]Custom techniques[/b][/i][/color]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Suiginton: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Mercury Release: Shadow Clone Jutsu)[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Rank[/i][/color]
	A[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	3-5 meters[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	Unique to Maema’s Kekkei Tota this technique is used like most shadow clones are, however due to its nature this one is gravely more dangerous. It was inspired by Maema’s father. Like other shadow clones it can interact with the environment and [i]can[/i] perform its own techniques. The clones also soak up knowledge and sends it to the user once dispensed of. When injured the clone disperses like liquid, splashing around. Considering the chance that it's melted the clone gives off a noxious, small dose of its poison in the form of gas [color=39b54a]what does the gas do? quantities? effects? duration? pls[/color]. At most Maema is capable of summoning 2 clones at a time.[color=39b54a]two in total for the whole fight or ...? quantity will depend on wtf mercury gas does.[/color][/indent]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Suiginton: Yasu no ha (Mercury Release: Blade of Yasu)[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Rank[/i][/color]
	B[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	Close[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	Maema strings four hand seals together ending on the dragon seal [color=39b54a]boop[/color]. He then moves his hand to the empty scabbard on his side and brandishes a blade made of mercury. The insides gives the weapon its shape and intricate designs. The grass thin blade is beautified by a thumb-sized circle near the base and a serpentine dragon flying towards it on the flat. When cut by the blade the opposition contracts mercury poisoning. [color=39b54a]durability + POISON DETAILS PLS[/color][/indent]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Suiginton: Haruhi (Mercury Release: Haruhi) [color=39b54a]i get a gaara feel to this[/color][/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Rank[/i][/color]
	B[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	2 meters around user[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	Maema wields the seal of confrontation towards his opponent. A second later he pulls chakra from his heart and it forms into a mercury maiden [color=39b54a]lol[/color]. This woman is malleable [color=39b54a]LIKE YOU MO-... Wait[/color], defense oriented, and floats off the ground. Haruhi is quicker than Maema and physical attacks are near useless against her. Cold is the only effective way to halt her assault as melting her turns her into noxious gas and she simply invades the enemy before fading away. The only downfall is that she only counterattacks but this utilizes minimal amounts of her limited chakra. [color=39b54a]so wait, i don't get it. is she solid? If so any strong person can slap her away. If she's liquid then ... She is kind of a useless tobi? Also that weakness is stupid. Basically only those with Ice Kage can deal with this, and that's a p gay and rare KG tbh. Please explain how she attacks, how she hardens, how stuff don't affect her. See this is a new KT, not KG, KT, as such we do need super details. AND POISON OMFG[/color] [/indent]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Suiginton: Gyakusatsu (Mercury Release: Massacre) [color=39b54a]edgy[/color][/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Rank[/i][/color]
	C[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	Long[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	Maema molds an armory of weapons behind him, all of which is aimed towards his opponent(s). Once released they shoot out towards their target at break-neck speeds. Hardened to the density of a solid if impact’s made the weapon can deal bone-breaking damage. On top of which mercury poison is dispensed through the body if cut or hit on an open wound. Some weapons that may appear are halberds, various types of blades, and lances. [color=39b54a]so this is kind of a magnetism thing. ok C is cool with this if poison isn't relevant. hence why I need details on poison. cough[/color][/indent]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Suiginton: Kohitsuji (Mercury Release: Lamb) [color=39b54a]baaaaaaa[/color][/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Rank[/i][/color]
	B[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	10 meters around[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	Maema forms 13 handsigns ending on the ram before releasing a hail, barrage, and frenzy of small mercury spheres. They are relatively weak impacting with D-rank damage but traveling at C-rank speeds. When they splash against an object the outer shell is broken and the mist inside spreads and joins together. Eventually a fog of mercury is made, endangering both himself with the lethal dosage  and everyone inside. Maema the fearless welcomes the untimely death if it's for a worthy cause. [color=39b54a]he's practically immune to it, that or the brain damage from mercury poisoning (which is the true symptom) made him 'fearless'. so hiding in mist poison version[/color][/indent]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Suiginton: Kusari (Mercury Release: Chain)[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Rank[/i][/color]
	C[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	5 meters[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	His main form of attack comes in the form of silverish-white tendrils with hand-shaped appendages at its end. They fly out from a mirror-source behind him, usually without the necessity of weaving hand seals. They have a limit of fifteen feet from himself and strikes quick. The end and length of the tendril can be molded into pikes, hammers, or other weapons. When exposed to extreme cold they become brittle and break. When exposed to extreme heat they melt and become useful as nothing more than whips at its best and at its worse, a noxious poison. [color=39b54a]this is not C rank, High B low A, this is basically Sasori's tail thing times whatever with mystery poison and shape shifting. It's strong, and no hand seals so mega reactive too.[/color] [/indent][/indent]

[indent][color=orange]❖ [i][b]Weaponry and tools[/b][/i][/color]

[indent][color=orange][i]■	Name[/i][/color]
	Dogma’s Disciple.[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Weapon/tool type[/i][/color]
	A elder wood, worn scabbard. Silver and golden dragons twist around each other on its frame.[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Range[/i][/color]
	Close[/indent]
[indent][color=orange][i]■	Description[/i][/color]
	A scabbard. . . that’s all.[/indent][/indent][/hider]
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[color=39b54a]Everything is fine until the thermometer got broken while shoved up his ass while still a kid. The mercury needs some work in the poison department. As a liquid metal? sure whatever, no one cares. But the poison, and the durability too (see Maiden). Yeah, there's shit that needs precision, but you're on the right track soooooo, goodie.[/color]