[@Buddha] [b]It made me cry, all the racist jokes were too much T_T[/b] 

Nah, it was actually pretty informative. I might need some pointers regarding the jutsus tho, the idea was sudden asf. It was just something I thought would be cool and really battle effective. 

All the other comments, I kinda left out on purpose. I didn't see him seeing his relationship as too important. So I didn't add it into his history. And umm, I knew they had shinobi in the village but his outlook was just kinda farmish I guess. Plus I wasn't sure how it all melded. How the Hamajo forces would interact with Ninja system. Hell, looking through his eyes it all felt kinda gray and grim. He was aware of the previous Kumogakure so I just guessed he'd dwell on the really bad things that happened and not the normality that surrounded it. 

The whole apathetic/hopeful conflict in the review. Let's see if I can explain it to you squares. Deep down he's hopeful, really deep. He feels like things can change. But his mother's death and father's change afterwards sorta clouded it, causing him to outwardly portray, and kinda believe in his own disinterest in the well-being of others. . . I guess what I'm trying to say is only in the most important of situations does he reveal his true self. The rest of the time, he can be seen as more-or-less apathetic. 

Either way, I'll work on improving his personality a little, making it a bit more believable. The rest, I'll [i]attempt[/i] to get correct but I'm near-sure I'm going to fuck it up somehow lol.