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Updated with my current progress, please let me know if there's something you don't like/would like to talk about/want me to edit/ whatever. 
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"...it’s stupid to go looking for a big brother figure in him. He doesn’t need that in his life."

mmmmmm

Write

don't do this to me

you know i won't be able to resist this. mmmmmMMMMMMMM. lOOKS LIKE INDIE'S GETTING THAT BIG BROTHER SHE WANTS (even if he's like 13 years too late)

ugh she would have been 5 when he left. ;3;