[@gohKamikaze]Well first of all (yes, I'm being an arsehole about this), I hadn't accepted you yet, so you posted a bit too early. Again you're new here, so I'll cut you some slack, but you be 110% certain that you're accepted and allowed to post in the IC before you do. 
That being said, I think you're good :) Argus seems like an interesting character, so he's accepted! 

Now for your post: Are you implying that the Pinkterton Agency knows something about Dr. Atkins's research and his death after one day? How much do they know? And what's your plan for getting Argus into contact with the other characters? But other than that I can't say I see anything wrong with your post other what I already asked about.