[quote=@Renny] [@Buddha] I gotchu. Do you want to read-over the few changes I've made? or should I just post it into the char thread? The few changes I made weren't too major at all. A few word changes, some redirection in the personality. A tid bit here and a tad there. [/quote] Maybe I missed an edit, or I'm just not super observant, but I don't see much of a change from when I did a quick re-read yesterday. Again, there isn't anything that bugs me about it other than the kid's young ass dad, but otherwise I'd say it's safe to put in the character tab. My primary issue was just needing to be more specific about how the poison stuff functioned.