[quote=@Cyclone] [@Vec] for [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3773019]this post[/url] Spelling and Grammar: 10/10 Writing Quality: 8/10 Story Line Advancement: 4/10 Character Development: 9/10 Independence: 6/10 Total: 37/50; 74%; 7 Khookies to Luna Short and nice post that was a good introduction to Luna. Quality was good but of course at the end of the day it was mostly just dialogue and nothing of great importance was achieved, hence the 4/10 for story advancement. Still, I liked it! To everyone else, I'll try to bake your khookies soon. The heroes that need khookies off the top of my mind are: Lakshmi, Ventus, Falas, and Allure. Am I forgetting anything? [/quote] Do I need to make a sheet for each og Sin's children when they reach adulthood, they will be Heros. Or I plan on having them be heros.