[@Estylwen] Pretty good so far, but a few things:

1). Could you put all the text in between the [indent] tags? It makes it much easier to read.

2). Could you expand her appearance section a bit more? At least describe her build, that's all I ask.

3). The power section could really use a bit of cleaning up. You end up repeating a few things, some things are pretty redundant, and while I'm certain she can heal people with electricity, it could be worded better imo.